Genre: Fantasy, Adventure, Young Adult
Publisher: AMG Publishers
Publication Date: 12 March 2009
Reviewed by Kaci Hill
I read the first three of Bryan Davis’ Dragons in Our Midst series one immediately after the other, and didn’t have long to wait on the fourth installment. It was about a boy who could breathe fire and a girl with dragon wings, a vile slayer, and a sorceress. I say this because it’s really the beginning. His follow-up series, Oracles of Fire, begins with a prequel that covers the first few thousand years of human (and dragon) existence all the way into the present, overlaps the Dragons in Our Midst series, and ends shortly after. The other three Oracles of Fire books pick up where the DIOM series left off. It’s a lot of ground and a long ride, but worth it. Davis began by taking King Arthur stories and turning them on their heels. Add a little technology, some evil sorceresses, and portals to every dimension from Heaven to Hell to a place called Second Eden, and, as you can imagine, it’s been a wild ride.
All of that to say, I’ve really enjoyed the ride, through all its twists and turns. I’ve admittedly had reservations about some of the characters, as some don’t fully develop until later. Davis does allow us to watch the characters age and mature on all sides. I admittedly wasn’t sure about the four-year gap, but it was necessary to allow the characters to grow and mature. Our fourteen-year-old heroes from Raising Dragons (Dragons in Our Midst) have left their teens behind and taken their places as warriors, both physically and spiritually. I think the best development is Elam, the steadfast rock who’s lived a thousand years undaunted and never shaken. In The Bones of Makaidos we really get to see his mettle, as well as the deeper parts of his heart that were touched before but never dwelt on.
Let’s face it; The Bones of Makaidos had the weight of the world riding on it. Fans of the dragon books have followed this series for four years, seven books, and thousands of pages. So, needless to say, the author’s readers were dying of suspense about as badly as his characters.
All that said, I did find myself a little slowed down during part of Bonnie’s (the female lead) story, mostly because she spends so much time in one place. The subplot, to be honest, felt as if it was only there so Bonnie could have one particular scene with another character, mostly for one speech. Her story arc seemed to lack culmination. My concern was, in one instance Bonnie puts pressure on Billy (the male lead) that I really didn’t think either fair, necessary, or truly in sync with who she is. (I leave out the details on purpose.) Moreover, while she’s turning on Billy to some degree, she’s also offering total, unreserved forgiveness to an abusive father who, in all honesty, still does not deserve it. It didn’t seem fair to me to so easily forgive the father but accuse Billy—who has always defended her, always protected her, and always been there for her—of being presumptuous in their relationship. I felt awful for the poor guy.
On the other hand, however, I did appreciate her learning how to use a sword and fighting back to back with Billy. I think my reaction was “Finally!”
To counter, though, in Billy we see the emergence of a spiritual leader in his coming of age, which has been something of a journey itself. And Walter and Ashley are always a good read. And I love Clefspeare in dragon form.
The other thing I really would have done different is to go easy on chatty combatants. This is a personal thing on my part, but it’s a little distracting to have two opponents fighting to the death and spending so much time stopping to insult each other. It’s a personal preference, I suppose.
Overall, The Bones of Makaidos wraps up most of the loose ends. I’ve seen a few reviews commenting on the way it ends, but, really, Davis can keep track of multiple plots, subplots, and characters, regardless of what I think about a few nuts and bolts, and pull it all together.
Again, this is book four of The Oracles of Fire Series, so make sure to start with either the Dragons in Our Midst series or with The Eye of the Oracle, which is book one of The Oracles of Fire.
Review copy provided by publisher.